example 1 ‘Urgent action on climate change is necessary to avert catastrophic consequences for both the planet and human society, as evidenced by rising global temperatures, extreme weather events, and the loss of biodiversity.’

This senctence is complex. First address statement ‘action is necessary’, explained by ‘for’ phrase with an ‘as’ addon to address the reasons(support statement). Serve as the ==thesis==.

example 2 ‘To improve educational outcomes, schools must prioritize mental health resources and support systems, as studies show a direct correlation between student well-being and academic success.’

This sentence suggests the article will talk about connection between academic success and well-being. The sentence stated ‘schools must prioritize mental health’.

strong thesis

• definition: concise statement to present main argument, guide readers(roadmap of entire piece)
• clarity
• detail(reasons or subpoints discussed later)
• scope(broad implications or significance of the argument)

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Example of paper1

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1. context introduce who they are
2. audience: People looking for a job in nurse related job.
3. purpose to recruit
4. style/techniques
   • symbolism(cross)
   • composition(balanced composition, 3 vertical lines and one horizontal)
   • subject selection(little girl, pathos appeal of sympathy)
   • color pallete(bright saturated, pathos)
   • sense of profession and responsibility in tone
   • repitition and perspective(‘we are’->sense of community, what we are doing in the present)